Reflecting on my first draft

After showing my first draft and receiving feedback, I need to reflect on my video and what I need to consider when re-shooting and re-editing.

I think, so far the video does work and the cinematography is fine. However, I need to add more and re-shoot some shots.

The narrative flows and is clear, so I will stick to what I planned for it.

I need to remove shots that aren't needed for the video, like ones of Kiki walking from one part of the room to another. They take up time and don't add anything significant to the video.